Changes between Version 7 and Version 8 of taser

Timestamp:

2016-02-01 15:15:54 (9 years ago)

Author:

dky

Comment:

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taser

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 The S-32 CEW primarily fires electrically-conductive darts at a target. In this mode, there is a laser pointer built into the weapon that allows the user to easily make aim. The target won't be killed, but will be instantly incapacitated. Each cartridge only fires one shot, so use them sparingly.
 
-TENTATIVE: Since the darts must be electrically connected to the weapon in order to deliver a shock, there are conductive wires that trail behind the dart when fired. Naturally, the wires cannot extend forever, so this effectively limits the range of this weapon to just a few feet in front of the user.
+TENTATIVE: Since the darts must be electrically connected to the weapon in order to deliver a shock, there are conductive wires that trail behind the dart when fired. Naturally, the wires cannot extend forever, so this effectively limits the range of this weapon to just several feet in front of the user.
 
-TENTATIVE: Since the darts are fired using compressed gas propellant instead of gunpowder, the user will have to lead his/her shots slightly for a moving target.
+TENTATIVE: Since the darts are fired using compressed gas propellant instead of gunpowder, they have a slight (but noticeable) travel time. The user will have to lead his/her shots slightly for a moving target.
 
 == Secondary Attack ==